Couple of days later after I clicked these pictures Monsoon arrived in Pune. I got to witness another great sunset.
Edited picture – My first few attempts to edit a picture. Your comments (-ve or +ve) are most welcome.
Some more pictures of Sun can be viewed at Caught Sun Rousing.
Improvement in tonal quality definitely. But loss of dept.
Also you should do trimming from the sides: i think the left side of the pic could be trimmed.